Hi Everyone,
I’m preparing an Exceptional Promise application as a Product Designer specialising in Design Systems and would appreciate feedback on my MC + OC1 + OC3 evidence.
Background / Personal Statement
My specialism is quite niche - large scale Design Systems across multi platform, multi brand design systems across financial services. My background combines the mix of visual design and business, and I’ve progressed fairly quickly into increasingly specialised roles.
MC1 – Major financial-services rebrand [Company A]
- P1. Newspaper article: Establishes the scale and significance of the rebrand following the acquisition of a live product led platform.
- P2. Scope diagram: Shows the breadth of my responsibility across the transition.
- P3. [Reference] Managing Director + (jira tickets etc if needed): Confirms my personal ownership, contribution and increasing responsibility.
MC2 – Market value / specialist expertise
- P1. Company A Payslip + salary benchmark (glassdoor): Shows my permanent salary was above the benchmark for comparable roles.
- P2. Company B Contract + market-rate benchmark (itjobswatch): Shows my subsequent specialist contract was also above the wider market.
- P3. [Reference] Industry expert who hired me for Company B (Separate person from the letter of recommendation). Supports the scarcity of specialism and explains why my directly comparable experience was relevant to the role + LinkedIn recruitment screenshot for (500+ interactions. Not sure if acceptable as supplementary evidence)
OC1-A – Innovation [Company A]
- P1 – Design artefacts: Shows the existing problem and the new approach I developed.
- P2 – Implementation records: Shows how the approach was put into practice while live product delivery continued.
- P3 – (?) Outcome evidence / [Reference] SLT employee / [Reference] Industry Expert: Supports my ownership and the case that the approach was genuinely novel rather than routine work.
OC1-B – Innovation [Company B]
- P1 – Problem / workflow diagram: Shows how multiple product teams were independently solving similar problems.
- P2 – Operating-model diagrams + working artefacts: Shows the new approach I developed to improve collaboration and reuse.
- P3 – (?) Evidence / [Reference] Software Engineer collaborator / [Reference] Industry Expert): Shows the approach being used across teams and its wider organisational relevance.
OC3-A – Significant contribution: governance [Company A]
- P1 – Internal system / workflow screenshots: Shows the governance infrastructure I introduced.
- P2 – Process diagrams + implementation evidence: Shows how I adapted the approach to improve adoption and ways of working.
- P3 – [Reference] SLT Director Engineering: Confirms that I identified the problem, introduced the solution and reduced delivery/consistency risk.
OC3-B – Significant contribution: product-team adoption [Company B]
- P1 – Before / problem evidence: Shows the inconsistency and organisational problem I was addressing.
- P2 – Solution + enablement evidence: Shows the solution and working practices I introduced.
- P3 – [Reference] Senior product designer: Confirming the use of the solution and how it changed their way of working
Recommendation letters
- Letter 1: Managing Director-level design leader (Company A) who was in my senior leadership chain for ~2 years and knows my progression and work in detail.
- Letter 2: Very high-profile Design Systems industry leader (Company B) who was also my manager and can speak directly to my specialist expertise and the scarcity of comparable experience.
- Letter 3, Option A: Senior design leader from (Company A). We never worked together directly, but later developed a mentor–mentee relationship and I interviewed with him for another role.
- Letter 3, Option B: Well-known Design Systems community organiser who knows me through the industry community, but knows my actual work less well.
Option B would be harder to secure, so I’m trying to understand whether the additional independence/industry recognition is genuinely worth pursuing.
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I know I’m weaker in the more conventional Tech Nation areas such as awards, publications, open source and major speaking. I’m hoping the niche nature of Design Systems, the narrative, small talent pool, career progression and strength of my work demonstrate potential.
Unfortunately, I also need to apply relatively soon and this is my only realistic option right now so I’m trying to make the strongest case from the evidence I already have.
Main questions
- Does this overall evidence mapping make sense for MC, OC1 and OC3?
- For OC1, could a recognised industry expert who doesn’t know me well provide a short statement assessing the approach itself against wider industry practice?
- Can OC3 still be strong where the impact is mainly systemic/organisational rather than directly tied to revenue or user growth?
- My manager was also a high profile, recognised industry expert, and I was subsequently hired into his team because of the relevance of my specialist experience. Can his corroboration carry meaningful weight for OC1/OC3, or would Tech Nation view it as not independent?
- For the third recommendation, should I prioritise deeper knowledge of my work or greater external industry independence?