Exceptional Talent - Business Applicant. Please Assist with Reviewing my Application

Hello Everyone I am applying for Exceptional Talent Business Leader. I am a senior Executive
I have worked in a couple of countries in Africa , in telecom, FinTech and banking
In product related roles (currently working as a Head of enterprise and Merchant payment
Here is my application breakdown
Reference Letters
LOR1 - A VC - who was a Cofounder /CEO of a successful fintech in Africa - 7countries
I worked in this company for 3yrs, on business role, and i had company shares.
LOR2 - Group CEO of Fintech in Africa whom i worked with for 2yrs at my current company
Before he left for his new role
LO3 - A Head of mobile financial services at a Telco Mobile Money Provider whom i
worked with in industry wide projects (5projects including central bank projects and presidents Flagship projects for financial inclusion. I have worked with him for 3yrs as an industry Peer, he has mentioned the same projects in his letter.
PS
CV
Evidence 1.
MC 1- reference letter from my previous MD writing about my product
knowledge and impact attached to letter a page with
- Screen shots of my letter of appointment to industry wide project
- a presidents’ flagship project for financial inclusion )
-a government portrait of me and telecos MDs during product launch.
-The invitation letter for the launch from the cabinet secretary, Wikipedia link, and
Evidence 2 .
financial performance report of the same financial inclusion project project
Evidence 3.
MC2 - outside Volunteering/ contribution ,letter of reference from a country
director of Non- profit organization whom i have worked with on several project, he
discussed 4 of my voluntary projects and their impact
Attached to his letter a thank you letter from a registrar of a university where i developed a messaging communication platform during covid and i also trained the team on how to use it voluntarily
Evidence 4.
MC3-Market Expansion - A document with the following screen shots and explanations
-HR recommendation letter letter at my exit from a company i was a country manager,
mentioning how i built a million dollar business at the said country from scratch
Management report screenshot showing key business metrics comparatively how i started and the growth after I left.
Evidence of ecosystem growth comparing how i entered and how i left 1screenshot
UN Project paper screen shot- of proposed solution which we implemented
Screenshot of architecture, and a mobile banking solution we deployed
Evidence5.
MC4- letter of recommendation from a Fintech CTO/CO-Founder also a
Cofounder of an african tech community; He discussed my recognition as a speaker
and leader; he spoke about my publications & speaking events
Evidence 6.
A document with following screenshots
-2 screenshots and video link of my feature in BBC Africa as a thought leader to discuss
different subjects affecting the continent
-the business year publication screenshot
-key speaker at women in tech in a country i was working a the time
-webinar where i was a keynote speaker as an industry leader screenshot
Evidence7
OC2- letter of recommendation by a university lecturer that i worked with at a mentorship
Program,
A certificate of appreciation from the university as a lead mentor at the business incubation Centre
Pictures of me and my mentees
Invitation Letter for the mentorship program
Evidenc8
OC3.1 - Letter- group product manager of a fintech- i worked with for 2years he
discussed my significant contribution at the company where i am at and the products we
collaborated,
these projects are different from the others that have been written in MC .
Evidence 9
A Document with
- screenshots of revenue growth, transactional growth, merchant growth at a telco
mobile money
-Video link of service demonstration where myself and team members from other
telco
were launching an interoperability service
-certificates of recognition by my company,
- a payslip showing bonus
-slide showing key partners closed
Evidence 10
OC3.2 - evidence of the company i Cofounded
1 document with the following screenshots
-company registration certificate
-shareholding where am a 50% shareholder with my cofounder
- financials
- platform screenshots showing live transactions of two of our products
- company profile Extracts showcasing different products that we offer
Extra Evidence 11
OC3.3 - letter of recommendation from CTO of my company which i cofounded with my partner in 2018. We have live services in several countries, i am a chairman of the board; he discussed my leadership, expertise in digital financial services and community development and how i have grown the company

@pahuja @Francisca_Chiedu and Everyone thank you in advance. Looking forward to your feedback.

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Hi @Charity_Mgalima You have done a great job in structuring your set!

Few points:
Evidence 7 in OC2: Assuming this mentorship was towards a topic in digital technology itself?
Evidence 9: in addition to showing impact, please do mention your own individual contribution to the success.

you can club Evidence 10 & 11 so you don’t miss out on a strong evidence.

hello @pahuja thanks for your response.

Evidence 7 in OC2 : mentorship is all about digital technology. Is my OC2 strong enough what else can I add ? I have an appointment letter from the University as the lead mentor can that be included ?
Evidence 9 : first am the product owner. My impact was in product development , implementation and service deployment. Also I played a key role in customer/merchant education campaigns , marketing activities , acquisition of key partners that were instrumental in metrics performance which are directly attributed to me. This impact is also demonstrated by two certificates I have been awarded for revenue growth and growth in partnerships. I have as well included payslip showing bonus awarded and screenshot of business review slide showing revenue growth from the project. Do I need to add anything else ? { for context this evidence is at my current role with a Telco Mobile money operator }
Evidence 10 & 11 I will club them.

Thank you in advance.

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I think you have some good evidence but some unnecessary addition to the three page evidence may distract the assessor and weaken the quality of your evidence.

You need to neatly put your evidence together to show how you are considered a leader in the sector (MC). For evidence one ofMC, you can state that in addition to the reference letter from global executive, i have provided evidence of my invitation letter to an industry project (show the email trail), my picture listed among other industry leaders on the project, you can add screenshot if the invitation to the lauch.

Ensure the main reference letter in evidence 1 cover your significant contribution and impact on the project I don’t see the need for adding wikipedia link, what’s the connection? I think evidence 2 is still related to evidence 1.

or how you have sdvsnced the sector OC2

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@Francisca_Chiedu thank you so much for your comments.

I have included your comments in my application.

Thank you once again.