Hi all, I need help with the rejection that I received today.
My application:
LOR 1 - Technical Director from a UK based company highlighting my work
LOR 2 - Sr. Researcher (PhD) with more than 20 international publications
LOR 3 - Sr. Engineering Manager describing my work
MC1 - High salary (Almost 8x the country average) along with Glassdoor comparison
MC2 - High profile event - I conducted an online event series with more than 80k viewership. I provided all the links, live video links, and media recognition in a prominent tech media house.
MC3 - Industry-led initiative - I worked with a leading industry initiative with a large cloud provider and trained more than 10k students outside my main job, many of them got a job because of the program.
MC4 - I developed a high visibility product for a MAANG which is currently live and being used regularly. I provided official letter on a letterhead from the global tech lead, screenshots of the product and links.
MC5 - Official reference letter for above on company letterhead.
OC2.1 - Talks/Conference - I was invited to speak for two years in a row in a Tech Conference in a QS Top #100 university. I have provided screenshots, emails, photos, and website links with schedules, etc.
OC2.2 - Mentorship - I have provided two separate mentorship details with metrics and number of beneficiaries. I have also provided proper website links and official letter on the letterhead of the organization. Under my mentorship, two teams won a national level hackathon in India.
OC2.3 - Official Letter on a Letterhead mentioned above.
OC4.1 - International Peer-reviewed Conference presentation - I did an independent research with my supervisor and presented a paper in a publication which was pubslished as a book. All links, certificates, and photos of me presenting were provided.
OC4.2 - Letter from my research supervisor who highlights my work.
Here is the Rejection Feedback from the Proforma:
The candidate has applied with optional criteria 2 and 4 (work outside occupation and academic contributions). The candidate hasn’t provided sufficient information to be endorsed for exceptional talent.
The candidate has not shown he has been recognised as having the potential to be a leading talent in the digital technology sector in the last five years. The candidate has submitted letters of reference, salary information, speaking events, and projects around product development. These are
complimentary, but they do not indicate someone at the forefront of his field or with significant recognition. Examples such as projects with XXXXX are interesting, but he has not personally led the growth of a product or business (although he has supported them). There are few other indications of leadership, such as winning significant awards or building a public profile nationally and internationally.
The candidate has not demonstrated recognition for work beyond the candidate’s occupation that contributes to the advancement of the field. The candidate has shared examples of mentoring and public speaking. Although this is laudable, the mentoring does not meet the requirements for guidance
in structure and selection. The candidates other speaking with XXXXXXX an the XXXXXXXXXXXX do not show how they are advancing the sector.
The candidate has not demonstrated exceptional ability in the field by academic contributions through research published or endorsed by an expert. The candidate shared a single paper, which is almost 5 years old, and the candidate was not the primary author. Although this is interesting, this alone is not sufficient to show exceptional ability in the field by academic contributions.
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It feels as if the assessment was rushed and many evidences were overlooked. I followed the guide in detail and have tried to fulfill all the requirements. Here are my comments on their feedback.
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They mentioned - “Examples such as projects with XXXXX are interesting, but he has not personally led the growth of a product or business (although he has supported them)”
My Observation: I led that project, even the official letter has mentioned that I led the product development and that I was the lead engineer. This letter seems to be ignored completely. The public speaking engagement with more than 80k views also seem to be completely ignored. -
For OC2 - "The candidate has not demonstrated recognition for work beyond the candidate’s occupation that contributes to the advancement of the field. The candidate has shared examples of mentoring and public speaking. Although this is laudable, the mentoring does not meet the requirements for guidance in structure and selection. The candidates other speaking with XXXXXXX an the XXXXXXXXXXXX do not show how they are advancing the sector. "
My Observation: My evidences clearly mentioned the structure, duration, and format of the mentoring programs. The official letter also mentions how the program was designed along with my contribution. I also provided links as a proof for the two teams that I mentored winning the hackathon. If this is not advancing the sector, I am not sure what is. -
For OC3 - “The candidate has not demonstrated exceptional ability in the field by academic contributions through research published or endorsed by an expert. The candidate shared a single paper, which is almost 5 years old, and the candidate was not the primary author. Although this is interesting, this alone is not sufficient to show exceptional ability in the field by academic contributions.”
My Observation: The research was done outside my regular job and outside my education but in my field of expertise (Cloud). I did it with a research supervisor (PhD) and the persons name is the first author. However, in the reference letter they mention in detail how I contributed and that the project would not have been successful without my contribution. They seem to have overlooked this piece of evidence. My LOR 1 also mentions my reearch work as he was one of the senior researchers in the same org.
Would an appeal be useful here or should I apply freshly?
Anything in specific I should do while appealing?
Please help me on how to present a strong appeal considering these points.