Application review for Exceptional Promise - Software Engineer

Hi all, thanks for the help consistently rendered in this community. I’ve used several of your comments on applications of others to put mine together.
I’d really appreciate your feedback on my application.

Category: Exceptional Promise

Recommendation Letters
Letter 1 is from the C.E.O & Co-founder of my current place of work (AI startup). He is also a Chair Professor at a UK University.

Letter 2 is from the Former CTO/Founder of my previous company. The company is a fintech in Nigeria that has raised to total of 8 million USD and they process millions of USD in transactions annually. Recommender has over 12 years experience as an engineering leader

Letter 3 is from the Chief Digital Officer of a top 5 Nigerian Commercial bank with over 12.5 million customers and over 5 billion USD in assets under management. The Recommender has about 2 decades of experience with previous experience in top organizations like Sony, Oracle.

Personal Statement
Talks about my background, education, journey and my contributions to the UK in the past 1 and half years of living here and further contributions I will be making to the ecosystem.

Mandatory Criteria
MC 1 - I led the growth of a product-led digital technology company; an AI company. I joined as a founding engineer and led engineering directions as the company grew.

Evidence includes: system architecture designs I made, screenshots of figma designs I made, pictures of me representing the company in talks and conferences, Screenshots of the Jira board I set up for task management among myself and other engineers, news clippings from industry-related blogs about the company, news clippings of our last fund raise less than 4 months ago, and a reference letter from the VP of engineering who is my manager talking about my impact on the company’s success.

MC 2 - I led the growth of a social enterprise; I built a platform that has been used to train Nigerian youths in digital skills. The success of the project led to a bigger deal with google for the NGO worth about 600 thousand pounds.

Evidence includes: A screenshot of the platform showing my work, screenshot showing over 8000 youths trained in digital skills, link to google play store, news clipping of the bigger deal, screenshots of code written, and reference letter from the director talking about my impact and engineering leadership of the team during my time with them.

MC3 - Evidence of my contract that I command a high salary. Checking on payscale, I am above the 90th percentile of earners in my career with the same years of experience. Evidence is Payslip of salary for the last 3 months

Optional Criteria

OC 2 - Work outside of my immediate occupation that contributed to the advancement of the digital technology sector

I was invited to speak to over 150 youths in Nigeria about Digital Skills and improving employability. My focus was Software Engineering. (I still have screenshots of me speaking and engagements in the comment section but the link no longer works, it seems the organization lost the YouTube channel)

I was invited by a social enterprise to talk about how to improve one’s chances when applying for jobs in tech. (This is still on YouTube)

I was invited to be an Engineering mentor for a period of 6 months and I met with the mentees weekly for that period. The mentorship program is structured and has a curriculum. I also have a reference letter from them that speaks about the criteria they used in selecting mentors. I have a screenshot of the testimonial one of the mentees posted on linkedin last year.

I co-hosted a tech meetup in Birmingham for product designers and software engineers, with 54 guests in attendance. I have evidence from posts of different attendees on LinkedIn and pictures. The luma invite is also still accessible.

I was interviewed by an agency to speak about my journey, growth (interview is on YouTube). Video has over 100 views

Evidence includes: Pictures, Link to YouTube live stream, event flyers, commendations on LinkedIn from one of the mentees, Linkedin screenshot of invites to the events. Links to some of the recorded sessions

OC 3 - Key engineer of a product-led digital technology company.

Evidence includes: Screenshots of figma designs I made for products 1 and 2, reference letter from the engineering manager talking about the impact I made on product 1, Architectural designs, Flow and Sequence diagrams for both products 1 and 2

Note: I would also like to point out that I worked with company of Recommender 2 and Recommender 3 in parallel, as a full-time employee and both were remote. I hope technation will not frown on this?

Thanks guys @Francisca_Chiedu @Maya @pahuja @cosmic.wilderness @hsafra @bukola @westside @Akash_Joshi @alexnk

Hello @pahuja @Francisca_Chiedu @Maya @cosmic.wilderness @hsafra @bukola @westside @Akash_Joshi @alexnk, I would really appreciate your thoughts on my application please

Your application seems strong. One area to consider is ensuring that all evidence is easily verifiable and professionally presented. For instance, combining PDFs of your published materials and architectural designs can enhance the organization and readability of your application. Additionally, while your recommendation letters are strong, diversifying the sources further by including perspectives from different industries or roles could add more depth to your application.

Lastly, it’s important to clarify any potential concerns, such as the parallel employment with Recommender 2 and Recommender 3. Providing a brief explanation in your application can help address any questions the reviewing committee might have. Overall, your application is robust, but these refinements could further strengthen it.

I will definitely do that

I’m not sure I entirely understand what you mean by diversifying sources further and I’d really appreciate more clarity. Two of the recommenders are from the finance industry, while the third one is from the cybersecurity industry. I also only got from C-Level executive roles because I read from previous posts that C-Level recommenders strengthen the application.

I will also add clarifying explanations like you suggested. Thank you for the feedback.